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Treefrog

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Hey! Did 5 of these pen drawings today. Gotta be productive. This was the first. I might upload the other 4 later. Constructive criticism is appreciated. Tell me what you think.
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1266x1211px 394.02 KB
Make
Brother
Model
MFC-J415W
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you've used the hatching to evoke a sense of volume which is definitely good, and the use of two colours of ink is also a nice touch. For criticism: play around with lineweight. Right now, the outer lines are just contours, they're just there to sort of hold the frog in place. Your lines will be more effective in bringing out volume if you make the lines closest to us and such the thickest, and then the farther ones and the details thinner. For example, having the eye on the right have slightly thicker lines around it than the farther one. I think you also probably did the feet last, they feel more rushed than other parts of the frog and as it is, they're getting muddled with the background. overall, nice work +fav :)